Oh how both kisses work so well. I want to go attack hubby and get kissed both ways and then again and again. One can never have too many kisses. And I agree what a great take on balance, I like this type of balance.
Thanks so much for playing in this weeks Theme Thursday, I hope you will surprise us with such a thrill next week.
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Nice contrasts of kisses...good take on the prompt ~
Yes, two completely different kisses... you know when I read the first one, I initially read Farther as Father (I was quite shocked for a moment! :)
Should it perhaps say further?
Thanks for catching that, Margaret. Got it fixed :)
Interesting form of balance. Happy TT. -J
Two different kisses indeed....great writing Mary! :-)
Talk about extremes ... I will have a bit of number one please. Loved this.
nice contrast in this for sure...i want a whole lot more of the first...smiles.
I like the use you made of contrast here. Very forceful second stanza.
OUCH!
Two well constructed and contrasted views of a kiss.
A kiss not to be missed..lol
Oh how both kisses work so well. I want to go attack hubby and get kissed both ways and then again and again. One can never have too many kisses. And I agree what a great take on balance, I like this type of balance.
Thanks so much for playing in this weeks Theme Thursday, I hope you will surprise us with such a thrill next week.
God bless.
kisses can be that way, nice write
hot lips there,
wow.
some kisses simply burn.
amazing how such dissonant results come from basically the same action; just that slight difference in pressure ~
soft brush of lips elicits desire
~
lips pressed hard speak of anger
a really wonderful juxtaposition making the differences all the more striking.
and each verse so well written. brava, Mary!
thank you for linking to Poetry Jam!
dani ♥
my heart's love songs
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