Plotting world domination one poem at a time...
Nice contrasts of kisses...good take on the prompt ~
Yes, two completely different kisses... you know when I read the first one, I initially read Farther as Father (I was quite shocked for a moment! :)
Should it perhaps say further?
Thanks for catching that, Margaret. Got it fixed :)
Interesting form of balance. Happy TT. -J
Two different kisses indeed....great writing Mary! :-)
Talk about extremes ... I will have a bit of number one please. Loved this.
nice contrast in this for sure...i want a whole lot more of the first...smiles.
I like the use you made of contrast here. Very forceful second stanza.
Two well constructed and contrasted views of a kiss.
A kiss not to be missed..lol
Oh how both kisses work so well. I want to go attack hubby and get kissed both ways and then again and again. One can never have too many kisses. And I agree what a great take on balance, I like this type of balance.Thanks so much for playing in this weeks Theme Thursday, I hope you will surprise us with such a thrill next week.God bless.
kisses can be that way, nice write
hot lips there,wow.some kisses simply burn.
amazing how such dissonant results come from basically the same action; just that slight difference in pressure ~soft brush of lips elicits desire~lips pressed hard speak of angera really wonderful juxtaposition making the differences all the more striking.and each verse so well written. brava, Mary!thank you for linking to Poetry Jam!dani ♥my heart's love songs
Post a Comment