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Thursday, January 5, 2012

Among the Fallen



I dwell among the fallen,
Those who struggle
To conquer mountains
Only to tumble
Into the valley of chaos,
Mere humans
With tangible frailties,
Inescapable faults.

10 comments:

Mary said...

Well expressed; but I think most of us do dwell amont those who struggle oftentimes!

Ella said...

I think most of us live there...we are toads aren't we, lol~
It was beautiful~

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Another toad in the Land of Chaos enjoyed your poem! Ribbet!

booguloo said...

Nice write, but have you considered moving? Smiles...

Karen said...

Nicely done!

janaki nagaraj said...

Yes, we are all vulnerable at times.

The Lime said...

I like the brevity and structure!

Chevrefeuille said...

Well done. A very powerful poem. Thank you for sharing.

kaykuala said...

Tragically that's the way we humans are, with human failings. You captured it very well!

Hank

the wild magnolia said...

"the human stain", the reality.

very, very, good.