Write Wing Conspiracy: Among the Fallen

Thursday, January 5, 2012

Among the Fallen

I dwell among the fallen,

Those who struggle

To conquer mountains

Only to tumble

Into the valley of chaos,

Mere humans

With tangible frailties,

Inescapable faults.

10 comments:

Mary said...: Well expressed; but I think most of us do dwell amont those who struggle oftentimes!; January 5, 2012 at 4:08 PM
Ella said...: I think most of us live there...we are toads aren't we, lol~
It was beautiful~; January 5, 2012 at 10:11 PM
Sherry Blue Sky said...: Another toad in the Land of Chaos enjoyed your poem! Ribbet!; March 4, 2012 at 10:43 AM
booguloo said...: Nice write, but have you considered moving? Smiles...; March 4, 2012 at 12:50 PM
Karen said...: Nicely done!; March 4, 2012 at 6:59 PM
JANU said...: Yes, we are all vulnerable at times.; March 5, 2012 at 12:42 AM
The Lime said...: I like the brevity and structure!; March 5, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Chevrefeuille said...: Well done. A very powerful poem. Thank you for sharing.; March 6, 2012 at 4:54 AM
kaykuala said...: Tragically that's the way we humans are, with human failings. You captured it very well!

Hank; March 6, 2012 at 6:46 AM
the wild magnolia said...: "the human stain", the reality.

very, very, good.; March 9, 2012 at 2:38 PM

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