Saturday, February 4, 2012

Hard to Resist

A jolt that beckons
Toward the forbidden,
A fleeting surge of impulse 
Detached from the consequences.


Grace said...

Nice capture of temptation..that pic is cool ~

Kay L. Davies said...

Oh, I can't believe those last two lines. My mind works exactly that way.

MaryA said...

Temptation is like that, isn't it?

Mama Zen said...

That last line is perfect!

Margaret said...

That last line is ingenious and makes the whole poem shine!

Fireblossom said...

Oh geez, I hate those consequences! hanks for being part of FBF!

Sheilagh Lee said...

ooh I love this and it's more perfect with that picture

Jingle Poetry At The Gooseberry Garden said...

true, excellent expressions.

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