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Tuesday, December 27, 2011

One Wish

A shooting star
Flickers in the sky,
Magical sparks
Trailing through
Endless emptiness,
The wish it carries
A ray of hope
For a lost soul
Wading through their own
Endless emptiness.

6 comments:

Mary said...

Yes indeed, stars DO symbolize hope, I think. And one cannot help but be inspired when one looks at one.

Laurie Kolp said...

When you wish upon a star... does this happen? I wish.

Andy said...

Hello.
When I was younger, my dad used to tell me the stars were God's angels. Not sure if that's true, but I do agree with Mary, I think they represent hope.
Lovely post. Thanks for sharing.

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Taylor Boomer said...

well expressed sentiments, wow.

Happy New Year.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

I like the succinctness, and the clever use of repetition with a slight change of meaning.

zongrik said...

nothing like wishing on a star