Plotting world domination one poem at a time...
May it ever be so!
Out of the box, get out of the box!!!!
I like the repetitive lines...I agree ~
here! here! let this be the new year resolution.
ooo I do a like a triolet - and what opening lines! 'wild hearts' always seems so tragically oxymoronic to me... nice job!
The repetition here is so effective! You've told some important truths here.
Very well written, with perfect emphasis!
I love the triolet form, and you have chosen your repeating lines so well.
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