Our tears
Cleanse the wounds
Inflicted by
The thoughtless,
The ruthless,
The careless,
And the clueless.
~~~ This poem was inspired by a prompt from Poetic Bloomings asking for poems about water (in any form.) I also linked this one up with dVerse Poets Pub's Open Link Night.
13 comments:
Thank goodness for the cleansing power of tears!
Brilliant little weave, Mary! The little poem that could...this is exactly how I try to explain it to hubby...but I think you're poem will do it much better...I've already got that awful lump forming in my throat as I ready to read it to him...thank you for this!
i am glad they have that power....because there are many of those people that will hurt without even thinking about it...
Nice--and true!
Yes, indeed they do, but,
Loved this.
Indeed they do-good write!
A short poem that says so much! How many tears must we cry...
Wow that they really do, and cleanse they surely did with your words.
Nothing wrong with a clear, straightforward poem! Good job.
tears do have some cleaning power...i like how you penned that mary
agreed...
I was oddly moved...
Well said, and so true!
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