Write Wing Conspiracy: The Deep End

Tuesday, July 19, 2011

I haven’t gone off
The deep end.
I just like to dangle my feet
Over the edge
And watch my toes twist
Light into dark
And back again.

booguloo said...: Very clever.; January 8, 2012 at 8:54 PM
phillip woodruff (jalopy dreams) said...: i like this, i like that feeling of flirting with disaster, a toe curling sensation... i like that, well done; January 8, 2012 at 11:23 PM
Abin Chakraborty said...: just make sure you dont slip.dangling on the edge has its charms, but dangers as well/ well expressed.; January 9, 2012 at 12:50 PM
Unknown said...: Yes.. I like to tiptoe along the edge sometimes, too. Makes things just a little more exciting.

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/01/08/lee-me-a-fantasy/; January 9, 2012 at 5:57 PM
hyperCRYPTICal said...: Very clever indeed - perfect little poem!

Anna :o]; January 12, 2012 at 12:40 PM
Judy Roney said...: Oh, I love this. I like the idea of just kind of dangling my legs off that edge. LOL; January 16, 2012 at 12:11 PM
my heart's love songs said...: LOVE THIS, Mary!!!; October 1, 2012 at 5:55 PM