tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post9077464723011374779..comments2023-04-03T03:38:05.784-05:00Comments on Write Wing Conspiracy: Millstone CreekMary B. Mansfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-74871930135074136562012-03-10T02:12:53.328-06:002012-03-10T02:12:53.328-06:00What a beautiful poem. It contains all the world&#...What a beautiful poem. It contains all the world's nostalgia.Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-31777828833492886162012-03-08T15:53:54.315-06:002012-03-08T15:53:54.315-06:00Beautiful Mary. I remember making those same promi...Beautiful Mary. I remember making those same promises.booguloohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12608900652242111334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-27844893314891557782012-03-05T17:59:39.364-06:002012-03-05T17:59:39.364-06:00Beautiful poem. So sweet and melancholy. It swept ...Beautiful poem. So sweet and melancholy. It swept me up, and broke my heart a little. Absolutely lovely!Tracy Crenshawhttp://thesesillywordsofmine.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-22449738675666283562012-03-05T02:13:09.539-06:002012-03-05T02:13:09.539-06:00Mary, this is an awesome poem! Such sweet memories...Mary, this is an awesome poem! Such sweet memories of childhood, and then, gradually, so bitter awareness of reality now. Yet, even with sadness, childhood and first "forever" love is always sweet to remember. You brought tears to my eyes.<br />Thanks for writing it! I'll visit again. How come I found you so late, and I've been hanging out with poets for over a year now ;-)Mariya Kolevahttp://www.phoenix-em.com/mariyakolevanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-49409939840825148952012-03-04T13:43:24.619-06:002012-03-04T13:43:24.619-06:00Dam...I'm not one to shed tears but this truly...Dam...I'm not one to shed tears but this truly did that to me. It yanked out feelings and desires I've had buried deep inside for years.The tone,your phrasing...all perfect. Great way to take a stroll down memory lane!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08660545422931632039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-57113763416263387042012-03-04T08:22:02.377-06:002012-03-04T08:22:02.377-06:00Nice memories portrayed vividly.Nice memories portrayed vividly.JANUhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06983287092498427967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-57153792394553810942012-03-04T07:33:00.491-06:002012-03-04T07:33:00.491-06:00What a lovely tale of childhood memories, first lo...What a lovely tale of childhood memories, first love and loss of innocence, then the melancholy write. There are some bridges we left behind, and some bridges we will always remember. Beautiful ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-75327898033427275982012-03-04T07:27:35.502-06:002012-03-04T07:27:35.502-06:00Mary- I really enjoyed this... the memories from 1...Mary- I really enjoyed this... the memories from 10 to 16 and the lasting effects... just lovely.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-87951586361179115642012-03-04T03:01:46.919-06:002012-03-04T03:01:46.919-06:00oh wow mary..like this a lot...the childhood memor...oh wow mary..like this a lot...the childhood memories and then the budding love that never came to bloom but still lives on after so many years...you painted some magic into my sunday morning..thank you..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-27274207003792963442012-03-04T02:27:49.856-06:002012-03-04T02:27:49.856-06:00This is beautiful Mary! A return to the past, a gl...This is beautiful Mary! A return to the past, a glimpse of youthful endeavor. To relive the good times and a desire to keep to the promises made when in the throes of love. Many can relate to this I'm sure!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-19350671688696204862012-03-04T00:12:04.405-06:002012-03-04T00:12:04.405-06:00oh, I love this! How you detail two such differen...oh, I love this! How you detail two such different experiences from innoncence to the loss of innocence, per se. and then the longing to return to the scene of that first love. a wonderful story that I truly enjoyed! thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-89834571345344693012012-03-03T21:32:32.260-06:002012-03-03T21:32:32.260-06:00wow this is a great piece mary...ah love how you p...wow this is a great piece mary...ah love how you progressed and stepped us through your tale...and the close is perfect...the promises never forgotten...bug smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com