tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post8927119309156503873..comments2023-04-03T03:38:05.784-05:00Comments on Write Wing Conspiracy: A Missive from the Lair, Part TwoMary B. Mansfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-42388371324328768402012-07-16T20:48:40.441-05:002012-07-16T20:48:40.441-05:00The climax rules supreme:
"Measured in iambs...The climax rules supreme:<br /><br />"Measured in iambs,<br />Tucked into dusty drawers<br />Until that moment of glory<br />When the tyrants fall<br />And the poet reigns supreme."<br /><br />I think you wrapped it right there!<br />Amazing the way you made you poem work for three!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-7356586711758721092012-07-14T11:14:13.800-05:002012-07-14T11:14:13.800-05:00... 'My demonic daydreams measured in iambs...... 'My demonic daydreams measured in iambs' ~ should I be concerned that my night dreams follow the same pattern? <br /><br />Seriously, the combination of all these prompts ~ written so beautifully is awesome.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-38694301567884275462012-07-14T09:42:07.839-05:002012-07-14T09:42:07.839-05:00As I wander through
The post-apocalyptic rubble
Of...As I wander through<br />The post-apocalyptic rubble<br />Of failed romance and broken dreams<br /><br />I love these lines and ALL!! Great write and always good to see a poet having fun!! :)'sHannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-14760415497758706972012-07-14T07:36:13.121-05:002012-07-14T07:36:13.121-05:00This is an epic-like piece, Mary... I really enjoy...This is an epic-like piece, Mary... I really enjoyed it, got a kick out of:<br /><br /><br />Of placating the ignorant, <br />Channeling the angst<br />Of Midwestern housewives<br />As I wander through<br />The post-apocalyptic rubble<br />Of failed romance and broken dreamsLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-45647903910244044022012-07-14T06:56:52.212-05:002012-07-14T06:56:52.212-05:00hehe feisty.
a warrior poet =)hehe feisty. <br />a warrior poet =)lucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-64589232439831640322012-07-14T01:55:39.161-05:002012-07-14T01:55:39.161-05:00My demonic daydreams
Measured in iambs,
Tucked int...My demonic daydreams<br />Measured in iambs,<br />Tucked into dusty drawers<br />Until that moment of glory<br />When the tyrants fall<br />And the poet reigns supreme...how cool is that...yeah..sometimes it's a struggle..but then...what better view than that from the poetic top of the hillClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-79475739643769475142012-07-13T22:13:21.402-05:002012-07-13T22:13:21.402-05:00When poet reigns supreme ~ I like this ~When poet reigns supreme ~ I like this ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-39389429907400747202012-07-13T21:38:06.827-05:002012-07-13T21:38:06.827-05:00woohoo looking forward to a poet on the top of the...woohoo looking forward to a poet on the top of the hill...we dont always get to pick our path...but we do what we do with it...use it as fuel...and write...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-27563829702853645992012-07-13T19:09:49.326-05:002012-07-13T19:09:49.326-05:00The multiple prompts was a bit of an accident...I&...The multiple prompts was a bit of an accident...I've been working on the parody for a while and the other prompts came along and just sort of fit right in!Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-36276319390749334722012-07-13T19:06:24.310-05:002012-07-13T19:06:24.310-05:00I am truly impressed with the number of prompts yo...I am truly impressed with the number of prompts you combined. It truly is fun to sometimes dream that you have the power, isn't it? We could do much worse than to have a poet in charge!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-89423274141320100042012-07-13T18:46:24.074-05:002012-07-13T18:46:24.074-05:00I guess I kind of went on a prompt-combining binge...I guess I kind of went on a prompt-combining binge here but it worked, was definitely a whole lot of fun to write at any rate and very cathartic!<br /><br />And just for the record, I have no actual plans for world domination nor do I view any of my readers as minions. Now my muse, that may be quite another story...Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.com