tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post8181628286564695297..comments2023-04-03T03:38:05.784-05:00Comments on Write Wing Conspiracy: A Broken Lullaby for Fortune's FoolMary B. Mansfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-26576125329325479502012-07-20T12:59:46.151-05:002012-07-20T12:59:46.151-05:00This is very good, well crafted and with a bite. N...This is very good, well crafted and with a bite. Nice.Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-85816447226208267432012-07-17T22:55:14.623-05:002012-07-17T22:55:14.623-05:00Rhythmically moving! I love the art and the image...Rhythmically moving! I love the art and the imagery this piece has. It sent chills and sadness through me.Day Dreamerhttp://daydreamerdreams.wordpress.com/2012/07/17/wisdom-circumspect-16/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-46549592695506639142012-07-17T07:40:13.670-05:002012-07-17T07:40:13.670-05:00Well written...the images are so vivid....Well written...the images are so vivid....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-1625293114443246842012-07-16T23:34:02.484-05:002012-07-16T23:34:02.484-05:00Beautiful form and rhythm which complement the sle...Beautiful form and rhythm which complement the sleepless theme.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-67626209165366718682012-07-16T22:27:11.756-05:002012-07-16T22:27:11.756-05:00Very good, Mary. A haunting representation of The ...Very good, Mary. A haunting representation of The Monk's Tale.flipside recordshttp://flipsiderecords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-80304199056399041802012-07-16T12:34:08.085-05:002012-07-16T12:34:08.085-05:00The rhythm and meter of this poem are perfectly ex...The rhythm and meter of this poem are perfectly executed and I really like the repeated lines. Very effective.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-27236805209452689452012-07-16T12:30:35.113-05:002012-07-16T12:30:35.113-05:00A resounding beat to the whole show, Mary! It remi...A resounding beat to the whole show, Mary! It reminds of what to expect when things go wrong. Wonderful write!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-81442405956827876012012-07-16T10:23:09.604-05:002012-07-16T10:23:09.604-05:00wonderfully crafted. I especially loved your use o...wonderfully crafted. I especially loved your use of the refrain.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-78438650933205754382012-07-16T08:56:58.183-05:002012-07-16T08:56:58.183-05:00Nice to return for a second read.Nice to return for a second read.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.conoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-26766024152609929612012-07-12T09:52:38.330-05:002012-07-12T09:52:38.330-05:00this is definitely sad....the echoes of that song ...this is definitely sad....the echoes of that song surely carry forward in ripples into our lives once it goes wrong...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-89380094184333632742012-07-05T19:08:08.554-05:002012-07-05T19:08:08.554-05:00Awww...how sad. You caught the mood of Shakespeare...Awww...how sad. You caught the mood of Shakespeare's tragedies really well with this.<br />RYN: Hard to keep one step ahead of them too :) My sister tells me at 16 they become monsters and hate you, but, by the time they reach 21 they love you again...I gulped....hahaDaydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-83033960554744718402012-07-05T11:59:13.232-05:002012-07-05T11:59:13.232-05:00Fortune's Fool is so resonate for those who ha...Fortune's Fool is so resonate for those who have lived long enough to experience it. Sleeplessness can be both a curse and a blessing - I figure out a lot of stuff that's bothering me in the middle of the night, but I'm often over-tired in the day.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com