tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post5938932573759545635..comments2023-04-03T03:38:05.784-05:00Comments on Write Wing Conspiracy: Shadows on the WaterMary B. Mansfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-58591521587697171802012-06-12T20:12:46.609-05:002012-06-12T20:12:46.609-05:00From happiness to, to sadness to peace...what a wh...From happiness to, to sadness to peace...what a whirlwind tour. It appears that everyone liked this photo as much as I did. You did a terrific job.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-14814154853939197312012-06-12T11:16:52.754-05:002012-06-12T11:16:52.754-05:00I haven't gotten to the point where I can meld...I haven't gotten to the point where I can meld prompts. Kudos. Reminds me of my lost loved one who had ashes tossed in the ocean... I can never go to that place 'of stones<br />Shaped and engraved by a mournful hand,' for remembering. <br />Thanks for your visit. We'll see what the next word list brings for a continuance... :)Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-78854208056347987862012-06-11T21:59:52.069-05:002012-06-11T21:59:52.069-05:00I am genuinely impressed by the number of prompts ...I am genuinely impressed by the number of prompts this wonderful poem answered.Sara McNultyhttp://purplepeninportland.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-56936517950723414882012-06-11T20:04:30.009-05:002012-06-11T20:04:30.009-05:00That was very resourceful. And with a Sestina, no ...That was very resourceful. And with a Sestina, no doubt. That's impressive. Great write.Walt Wojtanikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02723314300320671675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-63148503945866154052012-06-11T18:58:09.679-05:002012-06-11T18:58:09.679-05:00I really liked this line. >>> Seeking sal...I really liked this line. >>> Seeking salvation for an aching heart Is much easier here than in a field of stones. Just something about that line rang for me. Nice!C.C. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06070310862785263964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-35886503251647304862012-06-11T17:10:25.868-05:002012-06-11T17:10:25.868-05:00You are so ambitious, Mary! Great sestina here... ...You are so ambitious, Mary! Great sestina here... I especially like:<br /><br />I’m merely a vessel floating in place,<br />Unable to move into forward toward the light,<br />The loss of you a nail through my heart. <br />I take another bottle in hand<br />And make a toast to you, to shadows,<br />To lost heroes in a sea of stones.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-38748952321707444582012-06-11T11:46:21.347-05:002012-06-11T11:46:21.347-05:00This is a beautiful piece, melancholy, and filled ...This is a beautiful piece, melancholy, and filled with details that make it all seem so real.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-90894184988077421382012-06-11T07:36:38.839-05:002012-06-11T07:36:38.839-05:00the cold Corona was a key move...you aced this pro...the cold Corona was a key move...you aced this promptBrother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-84876214230961818882012-06-11T07:26:20.699-05:002012-06-11T07:26:20.699-05:00My hat's off to you on being able to combine t...My hat's off to you on being able to combine the three different prompts (especially incorporating those difficult wordle words) and come up with such a beautifully composed poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-44698904247031874832012-06-11T07:07:52.896-05:002012-06-11T07:07:52.896-05:00Mary, I'm in complete agreement about mourning...Mary, I'm in complete agreement about mourning in nature...we need that soulful place to soothe us. This is a strong write. Well done!<br /><br />Thank you for your continued support of The Whirl. You rock!brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-62917308484838747662012-06-10T22:59:40.883-05:002012-06-10T22:59:40.883-05:00A place of mourning becomes a place of peace...bea...A place of mourning becomes a place of peace...beautifulSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-8283209059453407962012-06-10T21:28:28.894-05:002012-06-10T21:28:28.894-05:00Wow!! Mary, excellent three fer one deal! I always...Wow!! Mary, excellent three fer one deal! I always enjoy when this can happen.<br /><br />I like what you did with this and the intentional repetition of certain words really brought a certain feeling to the piece.<br /><br />Nicely written, Mary!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.com