tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post5851320338726912583..comments2023-04-03T03:38:05.784-05:00Comments on Write Wing Conspiracy: UnfinishedMary B. Mansfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-55879845145910051502012-04-10T17:11:45.477-05:002012-04-10T17:11:45.477-05:00Mary, you may possibly be as dark leaning as me. ...Mary, you may possibly be as dark leaning as me. I love this poem and how everything flowed so well.<br />I also love the line at the end of each stanza.Sara McNultynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-47386649147669925572012-04-09T15:16:25.391-05:002012-04-09T15:16:25.391-05:00Ah, a new form 'Kyrielle' ...
Hope you do ...Ah, a new form 'Kyrielle' ...<br />Hope you do not mind this inspired verse: <br /><br />Healing wings for a safe flight<br />Escape wished in the grace of night<br />Allowing for complete retreat <br />Her story is not yet complete...<br />(JP/davh)Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-15757205466294065492012-04-09T11:48:39.173-05:002012-04-09T11:48:39.173-05:00This is simply amazing!This is simply amazing!Mystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-52395611950869755102012-04-09T02:59:30.098-05:002012-04-09T02:59:30.098-05:00You combined your prompts very skillfully in this ...You combined your prompts very skillfully in this poem. The repetition of the kyrielle lends itself to the idea of addiction.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-78767850638004038952012-04-09T01:03:49.363-05:002012-04-09T01:03:49.363-05:00Wonderful poem and companion photo!Wonderful poem and companion photo!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-47344121524538407472012-04-08T22:18:48.112-05:002012-04-08T22:18:48.112-05:00I am very impressed with how many prompts you used...I am very impressed with how many prompts you used to accomplish this poem! Whew.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-49849707123028847222012-04-08T21:33:23.041-05:002012-04-08T21:33:23.041-05:00Very powerful indeed. I hope she has the sense to ...Very powerful indeed. I hope she has the sense to stay away. Even if she loves the man, he is poisoning and, killing her.<br />Great, atmospheric write and use of the prompt!Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-13708670379753700172012-04-08T20:58:50.515-05:002012-04-08T20:58:50.515-05:00oh this poem stresses me out! run, girl, run!oh this poem stresses me out! run, girl, run!Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-25745314975861428122012-04-08T20:57:43.164-05:002012-04-08T20:57:43.164-05:00excellent us of the words combined with strict use...excellent us of the words combined with strict use of form and a powerful piece. Love the pic too.Mark Windhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662876682127886074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-6686067889719851172012-04-08T20:50:13.013-05:002012-04-08T20:50:13.013-05:00The like the repeating line..her story is not yet ...The like the repeating line..her story is not yet complete. I can see her broken wings...and I hope she finds her path to happiness. Nice challenging form...well done ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com