tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post5778257655331490599..comments2023-04-03T03:38:05.784-05:00Comments on Write Wing Conspiracy: A Harsh LessonMary B. Mansfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-46187828011954612322012-02-08T19:46:29.535-06:002012-02-08T19:46:29.535-06:00It's really hard to second guess a poem when i...It's really hard to second guess a poem when it's ready to make itself known--and this one has made itself known with power and grace. Thank you.<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/02/05/haiku-and-senryu-by-the-dozen-10/" rel="nofollow">Whirling Haiku and Senryu</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-82516379048270108502012-02-08T13:50:53.473-06:002012-02-08T13:50:53.473-06:00Nothing psychobabblish about letting words age lik...Nothing psychobabblish about letting words age like fine wine until they're ready Mary - that's what it seems to me you've done here ... and it's resulted in a fine poem ... if I hadn't spotted the venerable staccato, I doubt I would have realized it was the wordle, so finely wrought is this ...S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-26391936810116967372012-02-08T13:10:08.096-06:002012-02-08T13:10:08.096-06:00I guess I approach the wordles a little differentl...I guess I approach the wordles a little differently than the other prompts I attempt each week. I just sit with the assorted words for as long as I need to until I can hear their story, usually it's just one or two that pop out with an image (and in this case it was the Dodge Dart) then the rest just sort of fall into place. I know it seems a bit psychobabblish, but it works, so I don't try to second-guess it too awfully much! :)Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-19296380548465808132012-02-08T13:05:17.407-06:002012-02-08T13:05:17.407-06:00Excellently wordled! I wouldn't even have gues...Excellently wordled! I wouldn't even have guessed it was a wordle, as there is no awkwardness at all in the placement of the words.<br /><br />Ah, I remember the Dodge Dart. LOL. My aunt had one. Hadn't thought about that in a long time.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-26069811258623014782012-02-08T08:57:54.203-06:002012-02-08T08:57:54.203-06:00Harsh indeed. "Betrayal fuses to my soul"...Harsh indeed. "Betrayal fuses to my soul" - great line.Kellyhttp://www.starsandwillows.comnoreply@blogger.com