tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post3981863157276446711..comments2023-04-03T03:38:05.784-05:00Comments on Write Wing Conspiracy: Vision QuestMary B. Mansfieldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-82935625814606262632011-12-28T18:58:46.610-06:002011-12-28T18:58:46.610-06:00This lyrical piece evokes familiar images and conj...This lyrical piece evokes familiar images and conjures new meaning and understanding. You've woven the historical and emotional quite beautifully.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-50823251542097759642011-12-28T15:42:26.520-06:002011-12-28T15:42:26.520-06:00I love the ballad structure you've used, perfe...I love the ballad structure you've used, perfect for this story. A memorable poem!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-83379075996236695922011-12-26T13:55:06.832-06:002011-12-26T13:55:06.832-06:00I enjoyed this very much!I enjoyed this very much!booguloohttp://booguloo.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-66764260488525594182011-12-26T13:02:54.503-06:002011-12-26T13:02:54.503-06:00love the 'last of the mohicans' feel of th...love the 'last of the mohicans' feel of the poem.this is true for aborigines everywhere.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6434683607896818040.post-34270951274443805872011-12-26T09:05:11.272-06:002011-12-26T09:05:11.272-06:00Oh, great rhythm here, almost like the drumming th...Oh, great rhythm here, almost like the drumming through her veins. Also, good repetition, with slight change in the opening and closing stanzas. It echoes the idea of her history, with the uncertainty of it continuing.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.com